
Nemesis II: Revelations
🎬 On demand — watch any time · £33
£33lifetime access
Pre-recorded — start watching as soon as you’re in.

🎬 On demand — watch any time · £33
£33lifetime access
Pre-recorded — start watching as soon as you’re in.
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It’s one thing to know your foe… (that’s what we did on day one)
It’s another thing to know their path, how to track them, and how to have your characters defeat them in the most deeply satisfying ways.
As it turns out, the journey of your nemesis has both form and structure. More than a story arc, a specific set of beats, each raising the stakes, building tension and creating a deeper connection with your protagonist.
On the first day of this two day series, we identified the Nemesis Archetypes and explored which will be best for your story.
Now let’s get practical and map out the Ritual of the Nemesis (you could use screenwrirting language like structure and story beats of the nemesis, but we prefer ritual).
What are the specific steps every Nemesis takes in a well-constructed story?
Six hour masterclass with exercises, learn at your own pace and rewatch for up to one year.
This structure is present in almost all stories that we remember as being great, precisely because the nemesis was so wicked, devious and terrifying. Seemingly insurmountable.
Now, lets flip the screenwriting table from your protagonist for a change. How can you best inspire your tyrannical Nemesis, so that they will unleash the maximum chaos and destruction upon your protagonist?
And THEN… What specific steps (or pattern) will they take? One that works in all stories?
In our estimation, virtually every script fails to fully realize the potential of the Nemesis in the tale.
The result? Often a flatter and more uninspired screenplay that the characters, story and universe offer us.
And it’s almost ALWAYS because we spend enormous amounts of energy understanding the protagonist and significantly less on crafting a Nemesis that producers, actors, directors and audiences talk about.
Learn the Ritual Of The Nemesis, and the different ways the Nemesis manifests depending on the Archetype you choose.
The Seven Sacraments – the specific achievements a Nemesis makes in service of transforming the protagonist into the hero/ine they are destined to be.
The fundamental differences between a Protagonist’s arc, and a Nemesis’s arc. And how to exploit these conflicting patterns to set a protagonist and a nemesis on a collision course.
Re-discover your Nemesis with glee and excitement. They have so much MORE to offer you and your story. Trust us.
The story might end with the protagonist, but it starts with the Nemesis. Make it killer. Make your script unputdownable. Unleash your Nemesis.
Six hour masterclass with exercises, learn at your own pace and rewatch for up to one year.
“A fabulous course that has allowed me to add so much more depth and richness to my stories. I honestly can’t recommend it highly enough”
Varsha ShahScreenwriter★★★★★“The ritual of the nemesis went deeper than I thought and I discovered that some of the secondary characters in my current project do in fact play a far deeper role as allies to some of the other nemesis, so now they too will become stronger after I give them an oomph!”
Tas MalleScreenwriter, Filmmaker★★★★★